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author | Bjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com> | 2014-08-24 16:21:08 +0200 |
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committer | Bjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com> | 2014-08-24 22:31:37 +0200 |
commit | c9baba9212feb6e39151118647d45b34b029a6df (patch) | |
tree | 48dc0df228a071cc5639fe51bfce55d621a3a8f1 /pkgs/games | |
parent | 2a6c7e2874a3ada9b1c544db61402e03091556db (diff) | |
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Fix many package descriptions
(My OCD kicked in today...) Remove repeated package names, capitalize first word, remove trailing periods and move overlong descriptions to longDescription. I also simplified some descriptions as well, when they were particularly long or technical, often based on Arch Linux' package descriptions. I've tried to stay away from generated expressions (and I think I succeeded). Some specifics worth mentioning: * cron, has "Vixie Cron" in its description. The "Vixie" part is not mentioned anywhere else. I kept it in a parenthesis at the end of the description. * ctags description started with "Exuberant Ctags ...", and the "exuberant" part is not mentioned elsewhere. Kept it in a parenthesis at the end of description. * nix has the description "The Nix Deployment System". Since that doesn't really say much what it is/does (especially after removing the package name!), I changed that to "Powerful package manager that makes package management reliable and reproducible" (borrowed from nixos.org). * Tons of "GNU Foo, Foo is a [the important bits]" descriptions is changed to just [the important bits]. If the package name doesn't contain GNU I don't think it's needed to say it in the description either.
Diffstat (limited to 'pkgs/games')
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/banner/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/chessdb/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/construo/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/crafty/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/eboard/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/openspades/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/openttd/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/teeworlds/default.nix | 2 |
9 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/pkgs/games/banner/default.nix b/pkgs/games/banner/default.nix index b4e61b6d1d1f..b443a76b9a77 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/banner/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/banner/default.nix @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ mkDerivation "banner-1.3.2" "0dc0ac0667b2e884a7f5ad3e467af68cd0fd5917f8c9aa19188 meta = { homepage = "http://shh.thathost.com/pub-unix/"; - description = "print large banners to ASCII terminals"; + description = "Print large banners to ASCII terminals"; license = stdenv.lib.licenses.gpl2; longDescription = '' diff --git a/pkgs/games/chessdb/default.nix b/pkgs/games/chessdb/default.nix index 381e35632a6e..224eb6f594a0 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/chessdb/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/chessdb/default.nix @@ -24,6 +24,6 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation { meta = { homepage = http://chessdb.sourceforge.net/; - description = "ChessDB is a free chess database"; + description = "A free chess database"; }; } diff --git a/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix b/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix index 57d055ed3d3d..f94b489908eb 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix @@ -24,6 +24,6 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { builder = writeScript (name + "-builder") (textClosure localDefs ["preConfigure" "doConfigure" "doMakeInstall" "doForceShare" "doPropagate"]); meta = { - description = "Construo masses and springs simulation"; + description = "Masses and springs simulation game"; }; } diff --git a/pkgs/games/crafty/default.nix b/pkgs/games/crafty/default.nix index 0e2796df22d8..351e25388e17 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/crafty/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/crafty/default.nix @@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { meta = { homepage = http://www.craftychess.com/; - description = "Crafty is a free, open-source computer chess program developed by Dr. Robert M. Hyatt"; + description = "Chess program developed by Dr. Robert M. Hyatt"; license = stdenv.lib.licenses.unfree; platforms = stdenv.lib.platforms.unix; maintainers = [ stdenv.lib.maintainers.jwiegley ]; diff --git a/pkgs/games/eboard/default.nix b/pkgs/games/eboard/default.nix index 1decee4264a4..8dd06fa6a281 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/eboard/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/eboard/default.nix @@ -14,6 +14,6 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation { meta = { homepage = http://www.bergo.eng.br/eboard/; - description = "eboard is a chess interface for Unix-like systems"; + description = "Chess interface for Unix-like systems"; }; } diff --git a/pkgs/games/openspades/default.nix b/pkgs/games/openspades/default.nix index 7f11fc829032..c2218d033d79 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/openspades/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/openspades/default.nix @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { else null; meta = with stdenv.lib; { - description = "OpenSpades is a compatible client of Ace of Spades 0.75"; + description = "A compatible client of Ace of Spades 0.75"; homepage = "https://github.com/yvt/openspades/"; license = licenses.gpl3; platforms = platforms.linux; diff --git a/pkgs/games/openttd/default.nix b/pkgs/games/openttd/default.nix index 1b6b7f26a41e..ff96622cb59c 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/openttd/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/openttd/default.nix @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { ''; meta = { - description = ''OpenTTD is an open source clone of the Microprose game "Transport Tycoon Deluxe"''; + description = ''Open source clone of the Microprose game "Transport Tycoon Deluxe"''; longDescription = '' OpenTTD is a transportation economics simulator. In single player mode, players control a transportation business, and use rail, road, sea, and air diff --git a/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix b/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix index cfae6a4bb3e8..c435bbe5887f 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { "; meta = { - description = ''OpenTyrian is an open source port of the game "Tyrian".''; + description = ''Open source port of the game "Tyrian"''; homepage = https://opentyrian.googlecode.com/; # This does not account of Tyrian data. # license = stdenv.lib.licenses.gpl2; diff --git a/pkgs/games/teeworlds/default.nix b/pkgs/games/teeworlds/default.nix index c685f11c4c16..5276ec4cc34f 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/teeworlds/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/teeworlds/default.nix @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ EOF ''; meta = { - description = "Teeworlds, a retro multiplayer shooter game"; + description = "Retro multiplayer shooter game"; longDescription = '' Teeworlds is a free online multiplayer game, available for all |