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authorVladimír Čunát <vcunat@gmail.com>2016-12-18 13:31:12 +0100
committerVladimír Čunát <vcunat@gmail.com>2016-12-18 13:31:56 +0100
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release notes: grammar nitpicks in an entry
/cc #21257.
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-rw-r--r--nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml6
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml
index ef55ea05bcdd..d8b0ae01e333 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml
@@ -81,11 +81,11 @@ following incompatible changes:</para>
   <listitem>
     <para>
      <literal>Ntpd</literal> was replaced by
-     <literal>systemd-timesyncd</literal> as default service to synchronize
-     system time with a remote NTP server. The old behavior can be restored
+     <literal>systemd-timesyncd</literal> as the default service to synchronize
+     system time with a remote NTP server. The old behavior can be restored by
      setting <literal>services.ntp.enable</literal> to <literal>true</literal>.
      Upstream time servers for all NTP implementations are now configured using
-     <literal>networking.timeServers</literal>
+     <literal>networking.timeServers</literal>.
    </para>
   </listitem>
 </itemizedlist>